It was a cold morning on the bilas train. Nick tried to munch on a pallid oily chapati left to him by his former seatmate, Movie Buff continued to type her critique on poorly made movies, Mocha played with her turntable, Devious One wistfully looked at a picture of her cat which she couldn't bring with her, Shiroh continued to hone her c.v on her laptop while Kenyanchick was engrossed in last week's issue of Pulse magazine. They all raised their heads as they noticed the train slowly come to a stop at a platform engulfed by the morning fog.
Nick whipped the condensation from his window and looked outside. Little was visible in the fog but he could see the silhouette of what appeared to be a single figure. The figure moved majesticaly towards the train with the fog seeming to part before his strapping frame.The train's doors slowly hissed open.
The mysterious figure strode into the carriage with everyone wondering who it was. When they saw who it was, mini chaos broke out. Nick dropped his chapati in shock, Movie Buff broke into tears, Mocha let the record skip on her turntable, Shiro threw her lap top in the air but luckily it landed on the seat behind her and Devious One fainted.
The Acolyte was back on the bilas train......................................
Nick whipped the condensation from his window and looked outside. Little was visible in the fog but he could see the silhouette of what appeared to be a single figure. The figure moved majesticaly towards the train with the fog seeming to part before his strapping frame.The train's doors slowly hissed open.
The mysterious figure strode into the carriage with everyone wondering who it was. When they saw who it was, mini chaos broke out. Nick dropped his chapati in shock, Movie Buff broke into tears, Mocha let the record skip on her turntable, Shiro threw her lap top in the air but luckily it landed on the seat behind her and Devious One fainted.
The Acolyte was back on the bilas train......................................
17 comments:
ahhh... it was you!! I really need to get over myself!! there I was thinking, being the new kid on the block and all, I would be creating all this chaos!! great writing btw! oh, and I am first!! I beat all ur regulars ;)
*Breaking into song* Werocamu werocamu na wakinya kwa traini siti downi. I knew you wouldnt stay away for long not sure if its appropriate to say good to have you back but now that you back first , pole sana kwa msiba then welcome*passing the thermos*
EEEh, I confess am abit on the blonde side this evening.
ha haha
-woiye poor 0.5n0.5 is totally clueless
-as gishungwa wud say siti downi!
and that train be jisty as hell...ama its coz i on the inside lookin out?m
ROTFL! The ruckus at the front of the train rouses Aegeus from the land of Nod. As he wipes the white lines of drool off his face and stands up he notices the Acolyte and with a knowing nod, he slumps back into his seat and retrives his ipod which had slipped under the seat while he was asleep.
Had to come out from hiding to comment on this one.
Welcome back Aco....the wait was waaaaaayyyy overdue!!! LOL!
LOL.... You is a damn FEWL!
Dont think I did not notice the whole chapo reference....
bwahahahahahahaha
Hell be calling you man!!!!!
Is it me Acolyte or have you happened on an exciting way of saying nothing?
Well put mate!
@ Majonzi
Nani kama mimi!You're welcome!
@ Gish
It is sad being back but it had to happen.
@ half n half
Being on the bilaz train means being in a situation of getting no more strokes ie in my case being bila mama or jump off.
@ couch tato
You do know that when I get on the train it upgrades chap chap!
@ Aegeus
We most def have to share tracks while we are riding!
@ mocha
LMAO! Kumbe it was you who cursed me!Move up!
@ movie buff
You know I had to do it!I know I wont be there alone!
@ potash
Well you have to play the hype man at times you know!
@ Kenya77
I am going to leave your comment up for a while because I am feeling too lazy to delete it, I know who you are and you are not the Director of the PPU!
Feel free to set up a new blog to air your views, that is the best place to do that.
@kenya77: u give a new meaning to guiest bloggin.damn and i thought i had perfected that art
i wonder if he pressed ctrl v by mistake?
I am guessing this is the soundtrack on that train, au siyo?
Everyone punches a ticket on the train every now & then (even those who have cars & blicyles) - the trick is to not miss your stop
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I see the Kenya 77 bug has hit you too.
That famous train...very well written!
@Kenya77,
Are you lost or just hunting for an audience?
Heh heh. Pole sana kijana. Now ebu take gentleman-101 in order to ensure you get right and (become) get a good (for you) person.
my apologies Aco, wacha I do this....> kenya77, here is a website that would really love to hear from you...Kenya Imagine
oops Kenya Imagine
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL ati what ?? for starters, yes I like my mnyama but i dont beba a picha of ehr and think aabout her like that. lol
As for you joinin the bilas train, I was recently promoted to conductor so lipa fare chap chap before I shukisha U in the next stop....
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